Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: January 21, 2014In: Public

    The lives of three teenage girls competing for their shot in the spotlight are put in danger when a horribly disfigured man living beneath the stage claims them as his lovers.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 22, 2014 at 9:04 pm

    When a school nerd is given the lead role in the end-of-year play, she must overcome her desire to be popular to out the rapist living beneath the stage ....????? yes, you definitely need one protagonist

    When a school nerd is given the lead role in the end-of-year play, she must overcome her desire to be popular to out the rapist living beneath the stage ….?????

    yes, you definitely need one protagonist

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: December 9, 2013In: Public

    After 6 weeks of grieving, a 28 year old widow's family has decided she is coming home for christmas to 'get better', whether she likes it or not.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 9, 2013 at 3:15 pm

    This is just the type of story I would love. There are a couple of things missing in the logline though and the main character needs to have a more active 'voice'. I'am assuming the widow is the main character? If so, perhaps something along the lines of When a grieving young widow is physically takRead more

    This is just the type of story I would love. There are a couple of things missing in the logline though and the main character needs to have a more active ‘voice’. I’am assuming the widow is the main character? If so, perhaps something along the lines of When a grieving young widow is physically taken home by her family for Christmas determined to ‘make her better’, she must …………… what is her goal, what must she learn/overcome ….

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: December 8, 2013In: Public

    High school senior Koa Cohen's battle with ritualistic OCD is replaced by a condition in which he cannot distinguish between his unsettling day dreams and reality.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 8, 2013 at 6:06 pm

    Intriguing so far ... But, when this happens to him, what does he have to do (what is his goal?), what is the action (what will he be doing to achieve this goal?), what does he need to learn or overcome to achieve. Interestingly, I have just read a book called 'The Obituary Writer' ... with a similaRead more

    Intriguing so far … But, when this happens to him, what does he have to do (what is his goal?), what is the action (what will he be doing to achieve this goal?), what does he need to learn or overcome to achieve.
    Interestingly, I have just read a book called ‘The Obituary Writer’ … with a similar theme although not religious based … it was a pretty good read.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 … 3 4 5 6 7 … 15

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 8,000
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,715

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.