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  1. Posted: December 2, 2013In: Public

    When a many-times-jilted long-distance truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must learn to trust again, to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 7, 2013 at 8:21 pm

    Nothing like that in this case. A strange soul connection and the first time they speak they learn that they have both lost their first loves and aren't with the people they should have been with. Anyway, shared the logline at a meetup group today and they found the action lacking a ticking clock. NRead more

    Nothing like that in this case. A strange soul connection and the first time they speak they learn that they have both lost their first loves and aren’t with the people they should have been with.
    Anyway, shared the logline at a meetup group today and they found the action lacking a ticking clock. Not going back to the drawingboard just yet. Going to start on the actual script now.
    Thanks so much for your thoughtprovoking insights 🙂

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  2. Posted: December 6, 2013In: Public

    Families struggling with the threat of foreclosure are offered sustainable options to stay in their homes when socially-responsible investors crowdfund to buy their mortgages.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 6, 2013 at 6:42 pm

    I think this could make for a very interesting film around housing shortages etc. But, you need to focus it around specific characters. You need a main character who has a goal after something happens to him/her. Is the main character an investor who is maybe touched by a homeless person and then deRead more

    I think this could make for a very interesting film around housing shortages etc. But, you need to focus it around specific characters. You need a main character who has a goal after something happens to him/her. Is the main character an investor who is maybe touched by a homeless person and then decides to crowdfund. Or is it a once successful homeowner who faced with foreclosure decides to get crowdfunders ….

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  3. Posted: December 2, 2013In: Public

    When a many-times-jilted long-distance truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must learn to trust again, to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 6, 2013 at 6:34 pm

    That I think is a universal million-dollar question...... What is the psychological button that makes people 'fall in love' rather than embark on a relationship with solid foundations that becomes love? In this case, well I don't know. Initially it's a soul connection, sense of a date with destiny.Read more

    That I think is a universal million-dollar question…… What is the psychological button that makes people ‘fall in love’ rather than embark on a relationship with solid foundations that becomes love? In this case, well I don’t know. Initially it’s a soul connection, sense of a date with destiny. The underlying psychology …. well he is an avoidant and she is a love addict ……

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