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  1. Posted: December 2, 2013In: Public

    When a many-times-jilted long-distance truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must learn to trust again, to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 4, 2013 at 8:46 am

    Hi dpg, good to hear from you :-) As you can tell I'm still at it. Since we last spoke, I am half-way through Karel's course and have read 'Save the Cat' (which I found really useful) and Syd Field's 'Screenplay'. This truckie (truck driver) will have to get Sydney freight as often as possible and cRead more

    Hi dpg, good to hear from you 🙂
    As you can tell I’m still at it. Since we last spoke, I am half-way through Karel’s course and have read ‘Save the Cat’ (which I found really useful) and Syd Field’s ‘Screenplay’.

    This truckie (truck driver) will have to get Sydney freight as often as possible and convince the writer to join him on a road trip – that’s the crux of the action until the midpoint. I’m still working on putting that into the logline.

    Thanks so much for the response. You always get me thinking 🙂

    How is your work going?

    Best, Louise

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  2. Posted: December 2, 2013In: Public

    When a many-times-jilted long-distance truckie falls in love online with a city writer, he must learn to trust again, to win her heart.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 2, 2013 at 9:01 pm

    truck driver

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  3. Posted: August 22, 2013In: Public

    A fledging actress, unlucky in love, must decide whether to risk it all or play it safe for the “happily ever after” she wants.

    Louise Weihart Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 22, 2013 at 10:19 am

    Well said dpg ... totally agree. As it is now it is too loose and unclear, there's no ticking clock, no stakes really. But I'm always a sucker for a love story ... so .... When a fledgling actress falls in love with [describe the guy ... what does he do?], she has to [overcome some flaw, learn someRead more

    Well said dpg … totally agree. As it is now it is too loose and unclear, there’s no ticking clock, no stakes really. But I’m always a sucker for a love story … so …. When a fledgling actress falls in love with [describe the guy … what does he do?], she has to [overcome some flaw, learn some lesson], to [not sure just getting a date is enough … she wants the ring doesn’t she …?]

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