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In another universe, a young girl stumbles upon a plot in the kidnapping of children by a religious organization called the Magisterium, who will stop at nothing to ensure the continuation of their doctrine and hold over the world they live in.
Given that this is your logline for an existing film, The Golden Compass. Was the Magisterium a religious organisation? Given that the sequel was stopped because of religious group (catholics) I'd leave out the religious aspect completely. (Don't you think that Lyra's father, Lord Azriel is a bit ofRead more
Given that this is your logline for an existing film, The Golden Compass.
Was the Magisterium a religious organisation? Given that the sequel was stopped because of religious group (catholics) I’d leave out the religious aspect completely.
(Don’t you think that Lyra’s father, Lord Azriel is a bit of a 007 character?)
I’d suggest following the logline:
The prophesized leader of the rebellion begins the battle against the Magisterium; to announce her father as a hero, with the Witch Queen, the Gytians, an aeronaut and the armoured bear Lorek Byrnison.
By stating who is in the battle, a greater level of interest and the want to know more can be attained.
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Oh bugger, I didn't realise the mannequin was animated. I looked at what you'd written for ages, but it didn't move. Just describing it as a fashional mannequin should be enough, then putting that it wants a life of real friends. About the woman of the mannequins dreams? Is it a real person or a manRead more
Oh bugger, I didn’t realise the mannequin was animated. I looked at what you’d written for ages, but it didn’t move. Just describing it as a fashional mannequin should be enough, then putting that it wants a life of real friends.
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