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A well-dressed fashion mannequin desperately wants to build a real life of friends, family, work and love – but his true nature is catastrophically revealed during a date with the woman of his dreams.
Have you used the word mannequin figuratively or literally?
Have you used the word mannequin figuratively or literally?
See lessWaking from a four year coma David is told his daughter just died. He joins a counselling group, but it's three months before his daughter dies. He wants to change his daughters future, the counsellor argues it isn't possible.
Your take on it reads: After the death of his daughter the father awakes from a four year coma. And the father awakes from a four year coma before his daughters death. The counsellor's role is vitally important to the whole story. With regard to the one sentence theory, I agree. But to get the logliRead more
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See lessAfter the death of his daughter the father awakes from a four year coma. And the father awakes from a four year coma before his daughters death.
The counsellor’s role is vitally important to the whole story.
With regard to the one sentence theory, I agree.
But to get the logline right, the full stops should be included initially.
If you look at many of the loglines here a full stop has simply been replaced with a comma. In one of them the word temptation still has a higher case letter after a comma.
Struggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.
You start with, 'Struggling with his personal relationships, then you repeat that with, a pet psychiatrist risks love. Then you repeat it, when tormented by his estranged wife. And yet again with wooed by a high school crush. You appear to be explaining the first five words. Does the story have moreRead more
You start with, ‘Struggling with his personal relationships, then you repeat that with, a pet psychiatrist risks love. Then you repeat it, when tormented by his estranged wife. And yet again with wooed by a high school crush.
See lessYou appear to be explaining the first five words.
Does the story have more going for it than his ex, an old crush and a stalker.
You might consider having the stalker cause all his problems.