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A woman and a man meet and fall in love in their dreams. They are a part of an experimental program that’s getting canceled. They must find a way to meet in person before their connection is gone, if it was ever real.?
This is a really interesting situation! Definitely stick with this one. Despite my previous review on an earlier logline, here is a perfect example of where ambiguity can actually help. "if it was ever real" tells us exactly the sort of film to expect. It only offers ambiguity to the conclusion of tRead more
This is a really interesting situation! Definitely stick with this one.
Despite my previous review on an earlier logline, here is a perfect example of where ambiguity can actually help. “if it was ever real” tells us exactly the sort of film to expect. It only offers ambiguity to the conclusion of the film though. That’s key. It doesn’t take anything away from the rest of the plot.
Whilst it is definitely a SciFi, I would say that it’s key genre is Romance. The core elements of the story are all about love. The SciFi elements merely provide a setting.
See lessA soldier fighting in Vietnam is blackmailed by US Government agents into assassinating anti-establishment rock stars Jim Hendrix,? Jim Morrison and John Lennon.
Ooooh... that's sparked my interest. In a plot involving blackmail, it's essential you tell us what's on the table. What does he lose if he doesn't? Is there any truth to this? Conspiracy theory? Or your own original idea? There is most definitely a story here and a strong hook! I wonder though, ifRead more
Ooooh… that’s sparked my interest.
In a plot involving blackmail, it’s essential you tell us what’s on the table. What does he lose if he doesn’t?
Is there any truth to this? Conspiracy theory? Or your own original idea?
There is most definitely a story here and a strong hook! I wonder though, if it would be stronger if we followed an FBI agent/journalist in charge of investigating the murders and he starts uncovering the conspiracy. It could potentially be a dual protagonist story but going into it knowing who the killer is and that he is being blackmailed by the government takes away a huge chunk of story. By the end of Act I, the soldier would begin his assassinations… where does the story go from here? Instead, imagine it starts with the FBI agent investigating the death of Jimi Hendrix and he has no idea what’s going on. But something fishy is going on. Then Jim Morrison turns up dead too….! Then we get this “All the President’s Men” style investigation. Lots of shady dealings, drip fed information. But the case goes quiet until 1980 when John Lennon dies. Suddenly the investigation picks back up. All this is interspersed with a story about the soldier that gradually reveals his situation and the blackmail. Only for the soldier to be assassinated too at the end of Act II.
Over 10 years, an ambitious journalist investigates the deaths of anti-establishment rock stars Jimi Hendrix, Jim Morrison, and John Lennon, uncovering a huge government conspiracy as he searches for the lone assassin and undeniable proof.
This has David Fincher all over it!
See lessA country footballer is on a quest to avenge his mother’s murder, find a missing woman and put his team on the road to premiership glory.
Country footballer... do you mean he plays for his country? Or he lives in the countryside? I think it would be better to replace this word with an adjective that hints at his arc. So what's his biggest flaw? I can understand the goal to get his team on the road to Premiership glory. Finding a missiRead more
Country footballer… do you mean he plays for his country? Or he lives in the countryside? I think it would be better to replace this word with an adjective that hints at his arc. So what’s his biggest flaw?
I can understand the goal to get his team on the road to Premiership glory. Finding a missing woman… surely that’s the police are for? Avenging his mother’s murder… surely that gets in the way of his goal of putting his team on the road to Premiership glory?
We need to know what the event is that kicks this story off. What’s the inciting incident? That will determine the goal.
It feels a little muddled at the moment and I have no idea what sort of film this is. I struggle to see where the action is coming from too.
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