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  1. Posted: July 10, 2019In: Comedy

    After a nervous breakdown forces her to get sober, a young woman must contend with who she really is and navigate the path to her own happiness.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 10, 2019 at 11:39 pm

    What does a woman "contending with who she really is" look like on screen?Happiness is a great goal. But it's an internal goal. Visually, it's really difficult to understand that without a objective goal that represents happiness. Is there anything that she could be aspiring for that is visual tangiRead more

    What does a woman “contending with who she really is” look like on screen?

    Happiness is a great goal. But it’s an internal goal. Visually, it’s really difficult to understand that without a objective goal that represents happiness. Is there anything that she could be aspiring for that is visual tangible goal?

    With comedy, I think it’s really important to see where the comedy is coming from in a logline. With this logline, it sounds quite serious – mental health issues, alcoholism, depression… I’m not saying I can’t see the potential for humour but currently I don’t get the sense of where it’s coming from.?

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  2. Posted: July 10, 2019In: Drama

    A young closeted Asian man decides to lose his virginity, to a stranger that he meets online.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 10, 2019 at 8:05 pm

    The End. What happens next? Where's the conflict?

    The End.

    What happens next? Where’s the conflict?

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2019In: Romance

    After falling for the tennis world champion, a no-name photographer gets a job at the Wimbledon tournament and pretends to be a successful newspaper owner to win her heart.

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    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 10, 2019 at 6:26 pm

    Further to dpg's comments... How does a no-name photographer fall in love with the tennis world champion? Surely for this to happen they'd have to be close enough for him to get to know her. OR has he in fact never met her and is infatuated with how she is portrayed in the media and her looks. If thRead more

    Further to dpg’s comments…

    How does a no-name photographer fall in love with the tennis world champion? Surely for this to happen they’d have to be close enough for him to get to know her. OR has he in fact never met her and is infatuated with how she is portrayed in the media and her looks. If that’s the case, then his actions aren’t romantic. They’re just plain creepy. In this day and age, this is problematic!

     

     

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