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  1. Posted: July 19, 2020In: Thriller

    When a persistent novice realtor discovers her condescending boss is bankrolling his fancy lifestyle using client escrow funds, she hires an investigator to dig deeper, but he catches on and hires a hit-man to silence her.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 19, 2020 at 8:11 pm

    Richiev's and Scott's versions work well. Only thing I'd consider changing is giving her a characteristic that suggests an arc for her.

    Richiev’s and Scott’s versions work well. Only thing I’d consider changing is giving her a characteristic that suggests an arc for her.

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  2. Posted: July 16, 2020In: Drama

    When a female engineer with a typical male name is hired to the project of her dreams and confronts her boss’ shock that he, in fact, hired a woman, she must overcome attitudes of “boys club” sexism in order to maintain her position on the team.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 16, 2020 at 6:22 pm

    I think the goal needs to be more visual. Overcoming the attitudes of "boys club" sexism in order to maintain her position is the result of achieving the visual goal of... whatever it is. If she's just got the project of her dreams, could it be something like "pass every inspection while misogynistiRead more

    I think the goal needs to be more visual. Overcoming the attitudes of “boys club” sexism in order to maintain her position is the result of achieving the visual goal of… whatever it is. If she’s just got the project of her dreams, could it be something like “pass every inspection while misogynistic saboteurs attempt to get her kicked out”. This gives her a series of challenges and also suggests the antagonists.

    You’ve put this under Drama but I see a lot of comedic potential in here.

    “A plucky female engineer must pass every inspection while misogynist saboteurs attempt to get her fired after she’s accidentally hired to manage the construction of a landmark skyscraper.”

    I would consider having her boss as someone to whom gender is unimportant. He just wants the job done and doesn’t care who by – it’s about the bottom line for him. He could have pressure from the Chairman of the company who is a bit more old-school, and the primary antagonists are her subordinates. This makes more sense to me because they could be the least happy about the situation – taking orders from a woman – whereas, if the boss is the protagonist, he’d just fire her if he had a real problem with it. The boss character could become a bit of a mentor figure for her if he was sort of on her side and he could fight her corner a little as long as he doesn’t become a “male saviour” character.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2020In: Thriller

    When he learns his wife is planning to kill him, a rich man invites her secret lovers to a dinner party, and offers them each a fortune to kill her first.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on July 16, 2020 at 7:36 am

    Check out Les Diaboliques for an amazing movie touching on the same subject. Solid idea for sure! Agree with DPG. There's a few options but they're all pretty strong so I'd stick with this one.

    Check out Les Diaboliques for an amazing movie touching on the same subject.

    Solid idea for sure! Agree with DPG. There’s a few options but they’re all pretty strong so I’d stick with this one.

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