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When he’s hired by a distraught Donald Duck, to discover if Daisy Duck’s stepping out on him, A hard-boiled detective must navigate the cartoon underworld in order to catch her in the act. -Are you Fn Goofy- (Test Logline)
I don't want this to be a test! This sounds great!!
I don’t want this to be a test! This sounds great!!
See lessAfter his ex girlfriend had an unexpected pregnancy, a college student must develop a relationship with a porn actress to go on a road trip with him be their for the birth of his daughter.
Why? I don't understand why a college student would enlist the help of a porn actress to help him be there for the birth of his child. From this logline, there isn't even anything getting in the way of him being there.
Why? I don’t understand why a college student would enlist the help of a porn actress to help him be there for the birth of his child. From this logline, there isn’t even anything getting in the way of him being there.
See lessA misguided and jaded guidance counselor, depressed as he may be, deals with the unexpected end of his relationship. During a series of fumbles and misadventures, he tries to make a big splash back into the dating pool.
Check out the formula for help with formatting. Loglines are typically one sentence under 35 words or so. Why is he a guidance counsellor? What bearing does this have on the story? I think this can easily be trimmed down. At the moment though, this is just a story about a guy who's been dumped and iRead more
Check out the formula for help with formatting. Loglines are typically one sentence under 35 words or so.
Why is he a guidance counsellor? What bearing does this have on the story?
I think this can easily be trimmed down. At the moment though, this is just a story about a guy who’s been dumped and is looking to start dating again. What sets it apart from any other story on a similar subject? For me, there’s simply no hook. That’s not to say there isn’t one in your head… just not in the logline as it currently stands.
When he’s unexpectedly and unceremoniously dumped after 24 years together, a depressed guidance counsellor must…
Then tell us what he must do and why. What’s at stake? What’s different with this idea? What’s the hook?
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