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  1. Posted: January 14, 2020In: Action

    After returning to the criminal underworld to repay a debt, John Wick discovers that a large bounty has been put on his life.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on January 15, 2020 at 12:21 am

    Then what happens? This, to me, is just the inciting incident and the logline should cover the goal too.

    Then what happens? This, to me, is just the inciting incident and the logline should cover the goal too.

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  2. Posted: January 14, 2020In: Drama

    After a cheerleader is murdered, her boyfriend discovers that she is a ghost and ends up falling in love with her twin sister who happens to be a serial killer.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on January 14, 2020 at 7:45 pm

    She gets murdered but he is a ghost? I'm making an assumption that the cheerleader is a girl.?"turns upside down" is such a generic statement. Give us more specifics.So... his girlfriend gets murdered, but he is a ghost who dates his girlfriend's twin sister who is a serial killer? If he's not a ghoRead more

    She gets murdered but he is a ghost? I’m making an assumption that the cheerleader is a girl.?

    “turns upside down” is such a generic statement. Give us more specifics.

    So… his girlfriend gets murdered, but he is a ghost who dates his girlfriend’s twin sister who is a serial killer? If he’s not a ghost it makes a lot more sense to me…

    I’m not going to lie, whichever I try and decipher this, I can’t figure out what’s actually going on or why.

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  3. Posted: January 14, 2020In: Thriller

    Seven people risk their life while being in a deadly reality show as they to escape from an elevator.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on January 14, 2020 at 7:44 pm

    We need to follow one of these people. Any time where there's multiple people competing for the same thing, the audience needs to line up behind one of them and want that individual to succeed and the others to fail. Do they willingly participate in this game show? Or is it like a "Saw" game? Is thiRead more

    We need to follow one of these people. Any time where there’s multiple people competing for the same thing, the audience needs to line up behind one of them and want that individual to succeed and the others to fail.

    Do they willingly participate in this game show? Or is it like a “Saw” game?

    Is this a feature film or a short? I think the idea of a confined space and a group competing to do something is great but an elevator has a very limited number of options – door, ceiling, or floor. I can’t imagine it would take long to exhaust these possibilities so what keeps us watching if it’s a feature film.

    Check out a film called ‘Exam’. Similar(ish) concept where a group of people in an exam room competing for 1 job at a prestigious company and are prepared to go to great lengths to do it.

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