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A young medium is tasked with cleansing an old mansion but the spirits would kill to protect their dark secrets.
I feel like there needs to be more here to sustain a 90min+ runtime (unless it's a short of course). I think there needs to be a midpoint where he discovers the dark secret then he spends the remainder trying to escape or something. It's still a little thin though. If the discovery of the secret isRead more
I feel like there needs to be more here to sustain a 90min+ runtime (unless it’s a short of course). I think there needs to be a midpoint where he discovers the dark secret then he spends the remainder trying to escape or something. It’s still a little thin though. If the discovery of the secret is the climax of act I then I think the logline should include what this secret is. If it happens later then perhaps not.
What else can you tell us about the medium? What’s their character flaw? Their arc? Does the story change if it’s an old medium?
Why this medium? Is there any kind of connection between this house, the spirits, and the medium?
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I agree with yqwertz.Bodyswitch films are pretty common and the most important thing is that BOTH sides learn something from the experience (usually seeing the situation from another perspective) and end up wanting to switch back. I can see what the slave owner would learn about how he treats his slRead more
I agree with yqwertz.
Bodyswitch films are pretty common and the most important thing is that BOTH sides learn something from the experience (usually seeing the situation from another perspective) and end up wanting to switch back. I can see what the slave owner would learn about how he treats his slaves, but what does the slave learn? If the slave resorts to treating the slave owner like a slave, is he really any better? What you’d have to do is get the slave to empathise with the slave owner… and in turn get the audience to. That might be tough. What is happening in the slave owner’s life that is going to redeem him to the slave and the audience?
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See lessA crush kindled comedienne and?a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen
I'm with Richiev. I'm not even sure who the main character is. It seems as though the story is about a person who's come out of a coma and they're searching for a teenager - and this person has been influenced by the comedienne and her stalker.... Check out the formula to help with formatting and toRead more
I’m with Richiev.
I’m not even sure who the main character is. It seems as though the story is about a person who’s come out of a coma and they’re searching for a teenager – and this person has been influenced by the comedienne and her stalker….
Check out the formula to help with formatting and to understand what a logline is and how it works.
Simple is better in a logline. We don’t need fancy descriptions… we just need something that tells us the story.
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