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When a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.
Good point! I guess I meant that the people running the circus were optimistic, although that seems to be a lot harder to fit into a logline. When a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a circus full of very optimistic people, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness. HRead more
Good point!
I guess I meant that the people running the circus were optimistic, although that seems to be a lot harder to fit into a logline.
When a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a circus full of very optimistic people, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.
How about that?
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Maybe you could try something like this: When a demi-god tears a loving brother from his family, he must find a way to destroy the rule the demi-god has over ancient Earth and reunite with his family.
Maybe you could try something like this:
When a demi-god tears a loving brother from his family, he must find a way to destroy the rule the demi-god has over ancient Earth and reunite with his family.
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At the moment you don't have a functioning logline. This story is full of an inner journey but there is no external goal or an event that drives the character towards that goal. When an aspiring?young actor takes on a role with a gorgeous actress, he must find a way to get the girl. I don't think whRead more
At the moment you don’t have a functioning logline. This story is full of an inner journey but there is no external goal or an event that drives the character towards that goal.
When an aspiring?young actor takes on a role with a gorgeous actress, he must find a way to get the girl.
I don’t think what I’ve written is the strongest logline ever but I think it works okay. A lot of the information you have put in your logline doesn’t need to be there. You can definitely have all those elements in your script but I think you should leave them out of your logline.
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