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When an explorer’s ancient necklace is stolen, she must retrieve it before it is used for evil.
Updated Logline: When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a tomb full of horrors, is stolen by a descendant of the corpse, a spry young explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.
Updated Logline:
When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a tomb full of horrors, is stolen by a descendant of the corpse, a spry young explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.
See lessTwo ex-Navy divers fight both dread and fear as they are commissioned by the War Dept. to dive on the ship they served on, the USS Arizona.
I would probably choose a single diver as your main character to begin with. But also you don't have a goal yet. You should read the formula page on this site and re write this logline. You need to make sure that you include a goal because at the moment you have a character and an event.
I would probably choose a single diver as your main character to begin with. But also you don’t have a goal yet. You should read the formula page on this site and re write this logline. You need to make sure that you include a goal because at the moment you have a character and an event.
See lessWhen a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.
Ok so I've updated my logline based on the feedback and I've slightly changed the story because I don't necessarily want it to be a murder anymore, but here goes:When a clown unexpectedly dies while touring, a Goth Detective is tasked with solving this mysterious case.
Ok so I’ve updated my logline based on the feedback and I’ve slightly changed the story because I don’t necessarily want it to be a murder anymore, but here goes:
When a clown unexpectedly dies while touring, a Goth Detective is tasked with solving this mysterious case.
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