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A young woman’s life turn upside down when she joins a secret agency to fend off her bullies.
The event could be that she begins being bullied and that's what pushes her to a secret agency. But I'm not so sure how you'll be able to connect those two things. If it's a secret agency how does she know about it. And why would bullies cause her to somehow find the agency?
The event could be that she begins being bullied and that’s what pushes her to a secret agency. But I’m not so sure how you’ll be able to connect those two things. If it’s a secret agency how does she know about it. And why would bullies cause her to somehow find the agency?
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It doesn't look like there is an event that causes her to take this path. Loglines need three elements an Event (Inciting Incident), a character that that event happens to, and the the action the character takes as a result of the event. At the moment you only have a character and an action. The bulRead more
It doesn’t look like there is an event that causes her to take this path. Loglines need three elements an Event (Inciting Incident), a character that that event happens to, and the the action the character takes as a result of the event. At the moment you only have a character and an action. The bullies may have been bullying her for years. What happened to her that has forced her to join the secret Agency? What was it that turned her life upside down?
See lessWhen an explorer’s ancient necklace is stolen, she must retrieve it before it is used for evil.
Update: When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a witch's tomb, is stolen by a descendant of the witch, an inexperienced explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.
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When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a witch’s tomb, is stolen by a descendant of the witch, an inexperienced explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.
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