1. Posted: March 31, 2024In:

    When his murderous creditors granddaughter goes missing, in electric, neon drenched Tokyo, burn out, failed private investigator Joe Horiuchi is given a week to find her to pay off a large gambling debt, and discovers deep seated corruption of politicians tied to human trafficking and the organized crime gangs running them; but when the officer helping Joe wants to arrest him, he must rediscover his purpose in life and earn the trust back of those he cares about in order to venture further down the dark rabbit hole of organized crime to unearth the source of corruption before he gets his arm cut off.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Thank you Brian, I agree it's a little bloated and maybe needs a series main antagonist as well, I'll get on to it!

    Thank you Brian, I agree it’s a little bloated and maybe needs a series main antagonist as well, I’ll get on to it!

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  2. Posted: January 4, 2024In:

    After uncovering a grisly homicide near her newly assigned rural workplace a demoted city detective must play a game of cat and mouse with colleagues to reclaim her old job while covertly fighting to attain justice for her daughter.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Thanks Odie!!

    Thanks Odie!!

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  3. Posted: December 27, 2023In:

    A demoted police detective fights to find justice for her daughter after witnessing a grisly homicide that occurs near her newly assigned workplace.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Hi Vexmeister, Thank you for this, perhaps I should have used discovered rather than witnessed, basically the detective got herself reassigned so she could avenge her daughter, that's the third act twist but I didn't want to reveal that in the logline. Best Jim in Japan

    Hi Vexmeister,

    Thank you for this, perhaps I should have used discovered rather than witnessed, basically the detective got herself reassigned so she could avenge her daughter, that’s the third act twist but I didn’t want to reveal that in the logline.

    Best

    Jim in Japan

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