1. Posted: December 27, 2023In:

    A demoted police detective fights to find justice for her daughter after witnessing a grisly homicide that occurs near her newly assigned workplace.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Hi Vexmeister, Thank you for this, perhaps I should have used discovered rather than witnessed, basically the detective got herself reassigned so she could avenge her daughter, that's the third act twist but I didn't want to reveal that in the logline. Best Jim in Japan

    Hi Vexmeister,

    Thank you for this, perhaps I should have used discovered rather than witnessed, basically the detective got herself reassigned so she could avenge her daughter, that’s the third act twist but I didn’t want to reveal that in the logline.

    Best

    Jim in Japan

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  2. Posted: March 8, 2023In:

    When a spate of violent unsolved crime spirals out of control, a green FBI agent must accept his Spanish cultural roots and go undercover in order to uncover and bring to justice cops on the different side of the same badge before the city is ripped apart.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    That's awesome, thank you Philippe!

    That’s awesome, thank you Philippe!

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  3. Posted: February 20, 2023In:

    Cultures collide when a flat-footed reservist deployed as a guard befriends a rebellious enemy and must protect them from a sleepy small-town intent on financial gain from an influx of Japanese prisoners of war.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Richiev, thank you very much for this! You are correct the "them" is a single prisoner, so 'll rewrite this to try to reflect that in the logline. Thanks again! Jim in Japan.

    Richiev, thank you very much for this! You are correct the “them” is a single prisoner, so ‘ll rewrite this to try to reflect that in the logline. Thanks again!

    Jim in Japan.

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