1. Posted: March 29, 2022In:

    On the anniversary of her husband’s death a widower’s life outlook is called into question by the arrival of her husband’s blind friend.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Thank you for this! How about: On the anniversary of her husband's death a young widower`s bleak life outlook is called challenged by the surprise arrival of her husband’s blind friend. Seeing and not seeing has bearing on the story, but there is no romance involved. Jim in Japan.

    Thank you for this!

    How about: On the anniversary of her husband’s death a young widower`s bleak life outlook is called challenged by the surprise arrival of her husband’s blind friend.

    Seeing and not seeing has bearing on the story, but there is no romance involved.

    Jim in Japan.

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  2. Posted: February 1, 2022In:

    As police uncover a far-right group behind a series of grisly murders sweeping Japan, a police officer and former ultra nationalist seeking redemption must go undercover to prevent his younger brother from going down the same wrong path.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Odie, as always thank you very much for your advice and input, always appreciated! Best Jim in Japan

    Odie, as always thank you very much for your advice and input, always appreciated!

    Best

    Jim in Japan

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  3. Posted: January 26, 2022In:

    A grieving mothers accidental killing of a crime boss collides with her estranged fathers underworld debts, reunited they must escape a police hunt across country in an effort to prove their innocence.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Philippe, thank you very much for taking the time t write this in such detail! I think sometimes my loglines resemble something closer to an elevator pitch and, to me they seem overly long, this advice in concentrating and essentializing is really useful, thank you! Jim in Japan

    Philippe, thank you very much for taking the time t write this in such detail! I think sometimes my loglines resemble something closer to an elevator pitch and, to me they seem overly long, this advice in concentrating and essentializing is really useful, thank you!

    Jim in Japan

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