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Two cultures collide when a flat-footed reservist deploys as a guard befriending a rebellious enemy as a sleepy small town struggles to prepare for an influx of Japanese prisoners of war.
Hi, It's based on a true story from Featherston New Zealand. Best Jim in Japan
Hi,
It’s based on a true story from Featherston New Zealand.
Best
Jim in Japan
See lessA Japanese soldier discovers his world around him in shambles when he survived and people perished during World War II.
Internal and external conflict might be something to consider, the arrival of the allied forces and their behaviour on the mainland both good and bad clashed with a lot of the returning defeated infantry man, perhaps he has to learn to work with his recent enemy to achieve a certain tangible goal? WRead more
Internal and external conflict might be something to consider, the arrival of the allied forces and their behaviour on the mainland both good and bad clashed with a lot of the returning defeated infantry man, perhaps he has to learn to work with his recent enemy to achieve a certain tangible goal?
Wherever you choose to goal with those elements, I strongly suggest you ground the story in a lot of strong, well researched ideas.
Best
Jim in Japan.
See lessA grieving mother’s reunion with her family turns into a terrifying escape when her father’s debt launches a police hunt and she must run for the crimes she has committed.
Thank you very much for this feedback! This logline was the result of an attempt to rewrite an incredibly convoluted script with too many characters, I therefore went back, removed all the poetic suggestions and wrote a barebones sentence choosing who I though was the protagonist at the core. I canRead more
Thank you very much for this feedback! This logline was the result of an attempt to rewrite an incredibly convoluted script with too many characters, I therefore went back, removed all the poetic suggestions and wrote a barebones sentence choosing who I though was the protagonist at the core.
I can see how it may read as a brief of the first ten pages…now, I greatly appreciate the time you took to write this, in return I will be sharing a counter proposal very soon!
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Jim in Japan
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