1. Posted: October 26, 2021In:

    Stripped of his license a disgraced ER doctor running from his past reinvents himself in Japan only to be lured deep into a community with a violent secret where he must solve an unspeakable crime.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Thank you Richiev, appreciate the advice! Jim in Japan.

    Thank you Richiev, appreciate the advice!

    Jim in Japan.

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  2. Posted: October 15, 2021In:

    A disgraced ex-cop, offered the chance to regain custody of his son must partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor to catch a serial killer before he kills more children, digging for the truth they unearth a hidden layer of personal and professional secrets of those involved from within and outside the law.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    I agree it always felt a little convoluted to me, thank you for the advice!

    I agree it always felt a little convoluted to me, thank you for the advice!

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  3. Posted: October 14, 2021In:

    Coerced into losing, a past his prime boxer desperate to redeem his past must regain his boxing license to compete in a final fight of his life for the last, most precious payday, custody of his kidnapped son.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Thank you for this Benjamin, appreciate the feedback and see very clearly your points, back to the drawing board! Jim in Japan

    Thank you for this Benjamin, appreciate the feedback and see very clearly your points, back to the drawing board!

    Jim in Japan

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