1. Posted: November 25, 2022In:

    Families must take the law into their own hands after they discover the new neighbors aren’t the perfect family everyone thought they were.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Thank you Richiev, you couldn't be more correct, this logline is very vague, I'll get back to work on it, appreciate your feedback very much. Regards Jim in Japan.

    Thank you Richiev, you couldn’t be more correct, this logline is very vague, I’ll get back to work on it, appreciate your feedback very much.

    Regards

    Jim in Japan.

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  2. Posted: August 10, 2022In:

    A disgraced detective reassigned to a residential police box discovers a grisly murder and must protect her daughter from a serial killer targeting young women.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Thank you Ben, yes very helpful! Best Jim in Japan

    Thank you Ben, yes very helpful!

    Best

    Jim in Japan

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  3. Posted: March 29, 2022In:

    On the anniversary of her husband’s death a widower’s life outlook is called into question by the arrival of her husband’s blind friend.

    mobiuswest Penpusher

    Apologies, made a typo in the last: On the anniversary of her husband’s death a young widower`s bleak life outlook is challenged by the surprise arrival of her husband’s blind friend.

    Apologies, made a typo in the last:

    On the anniversary of her husband’s death a young widower`s bleak life outlook is challenged by the surprise arrival of her husband’s blind friend.

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