1. Posted: October 29, 2017In:

    When two young couple fall in love, they must fight their families rivalry if they are to live their romance.

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    moviefreak81 Samurai

    And your version gives a little more of the plot. Since the logline is intended for producers, perhaps your version would be preferable :)

    And your version gives a little more of the plot. Since the logline is intended for producers, perhaps your version would be preferable 🙂

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  2. Posted: October 29, 2017In:

    When two young couple fall in love, they must fight their families rivalry if they are to live their romance.

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    moviefreak81 Samurai

    My attempt at Romeo and Juliet...

    My attempt at Romeo and Juliet…

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  3. Posted: October 29, 2017In:

    When a 12 year old girl becomes under protection of a hitmen, she must learn the tools of the trade to avenge her parents assassinated by gangsters.

    moviefreak81 Samurai

    It's for the movie "Leon the professional". At first, the inciting incident was the killing... but for the logline it seems like more logical her being under protection of Leon... what do you think?

    It’s for the movie “Leon the professional”.

    At first, the inciting incident was the killing… but for the logline it seems like more logical her being under protection of Leon… what do you think?

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