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  1. Posted: October 24, 2013In: Public

    A newly wed gay couple wants nothing more than live a normal life in the gated community they've moved into, but their arrival leads to civil strife as the sexually repressed conservative leader of the homeowners association will stop at nothing to drive them out.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on October 26, 2013 at 7:15 pm

    Thank you. I think it would be mostly comedy, but maybe not so lighthearted, but more dark humor. But that version of the logline is probably still closer to what I have in mind.

    Thank you. I think it would be mostly comedy, but maybe not so lighthearted, but more dark humor. But that version of the logline is probably still closer to what I have in mind.

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  2. Posted: October 25, 2013In: Public

    To save his kidnapped wife, a brilliant engineer will have to win her back on a deadly game show in the decaying city of the future.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on October 26, 2013 at 6:15 am

    It seems to me that it's whoever runs the game show who kidnapped the wife, in order to force the engineer to participate. Is it a televised game show? For some reason my imagination just made it a lethal version of a typical Japanes game show, with the host being some vile 1980s type game show hostRead more

    It seems to me that it’s whoever runs the game show who kidnapped the wife, in order to force the engineer to participate.

    Is it a televised game show?

    For some reason my imagination just made it a lethal version of a typical Japanes game show, with the host being some vile 1980s type game show host in a big plaid jacket and bit of a cross between a used car salesman and Saul Goodman (the lawyer on Breaking Bad). I don’t know if that’s what you have in mind, but I think that could be an interesting twist. I’d definately go see that movie, if that was the case.

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  3. Posted: October 26, 2013In: Public

    When the overbearing family of a recently deceased young woman refuses to acknowledge her undocumented funeral wishes, her lackadaisical boyfriend must dig up the body in the middle of the night and embark on an odyssey to give her the burial she wanted, finally learning to fully appreciate her along the way.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on October 26, 2013 at 6:02 am

    I like it, but it's a bit on the long side. ... Though, to be fair, my latest logline is a bit long as well. By the look of things the boyfriend is the actual protagonist so maybe you should start with him. A lackadaisical young man struggles to honor the funeral wishes of his recently deceased girlRead more

    I like it, but it’s a bit on the long side. … Though, to be fair, my latest logline is a bit long as well.

    By the look of things the boyfriend is the actual protagonist so maybe you should start with him.

    A lackadaisical young man struggles to honor the funeral wishes of his recently deceased girlfriend, even if it means having to dig her body up from her overbearing family’s prestigeous bureal plot, going against their wishes.

    Something like that, maybe. But then there’s the question, what are the stakes? What happens if he fails? Is there something utterly devastating that will happen if he doesn’t honor his girlfriend’s wishes?

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