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  1. Posted: May 20, 2012In: Public

    A retired galactic cop is looking to upgrade his space ship but finds an outpost where everybody but a clumsy noncom and an evil botanist have been wiped out by a poisonous plant.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on May 22, 2012 at 5:14 am

    Actually he comes to the station initially to pick up a package, an engine part that will upgrade his ship. I suppose that could be made clearer. My bad, I missed out on a dash. It's supposed to be non-com, short for non-commissioned officer. Maybe it would be clearer with "NCO"?

    Actually he comes to the station initially to pick up a package, an engine part that will upgrade his ship. I suppose that could be made clearer.

    My bad, I missed out on a dash. It’s supposed to be non-com, short for non-commissioned officer. Maybe it would be clearer with “NCO”?

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2012In: Public

    Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, a female Iraq war vet of color, a teenage hunk from the feed store, and a cattle dog, come to the aid of a neighbor who\'s son has been kidnapped.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on May 20, 2012 at 10:00 pm

    Just a little confused here. Is it about taking on the warring Texas drug cartels or a kidnapped boy? Was he kidnapped by a drug cartel? If the drug cartels are the kidnappers you might want to put that last, in conjunction with the mention of the kidnapped boy.

    Just a little confused here. Is it about taking on the warring Texas drug cartels or a kidnapped boy? Was he kidnapped by a drug cartel? If the drug cartels are the kidnappers you might want to put that last, in conjunction with the mention of the kidnapped boy.

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