1. Posted: May 7, 2013In:

    When a starving empire?s water mines run dry, two slave girls must revive a mythical power that could save the world.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    The term "water mine" makes me see people deep underground with pick axes chopping ice out of the ground. It's just such an odd image that I'd love to see that on the big screen.

    The term “water mine” makes me see people deep underground with pick axes chopping ice out of the ground. It’s just such an odd image that I’d love to see that on the big screen.

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  2. Posted: April 3, 2013In:

    A former gang member, now an undercover cop, travels through a dangerous inner-city labyrinth to kill a notorious gang leader. Boyz n the Hood meets Apocalypse Now.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    Apocalypse Now is, I believe, losely based on the novel Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad.

    Apocalypse Now is, I believe, losely based on the novel Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad.

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2013In:

    A contestant on the Bachelor-esque show "Token of Love" hatches a plot to win the secret million dollar prize with the help of the show's cynical host.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    Is this a fictional TV-show that only exist in your script? In that case I think you don't need to mention the title of the show in the logline. Maybe something like this?: A contestant on a bachelor-esque show conspire with the host to win the secret million dollar prize. But if the protagonist isRead more

    Is this a fictional TV-show that only exist in your script? In that case I think you don’t need to mention the title of the show in the logline.

    Maybe something like this?:

    A contestant on a bachelor-esque show conspire with the host to win the secret million dollar prize.

    But if the protagonist is somehow cheating ? that’s what it sounds like to me ? what makes us want to root for her?

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