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A researcher hired by NASA to find a wormhole during an alien invasion.
Isn't it a little superfluous to say from outer space? Where else would an alien invasion come from? And why does he only have seven days to do it if he has a time machine? Or is there some limitation that only allows him to travel seven days into the past? I remember seeing a few episodes of a shorRead more
Isn’t it a little superfluous to say from outer space? Where else would an alien invasion come from?
And why does he only have seven days to do it if he has a time machine? Or is there some limitation that only allows him to travel seven days into the past? I remember seeing a few episodes of a short-lived TV show with the premise that they always sent him seven days into the past.
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This logline is a bit vague. Even if there's a group of characters there should be someone who's the main protagonist, and with astronauts, there'd be a chain of command. Someone should drive the plot forward more than the others, so write the logline from their perspective. Next, give them a clear,Read more
This logline is a bit vague.
Even if there’s a group of characters there should be someone who’s the main protagonist, and with astronauts, there’d be a chain of command. Someone should drive the plot forward more than the others, so write the logline from their perspective.
Next, give them a clear, tangible goal, like be the first humans to travel to Planet X, (change to whatever fits) or on a rescue mission to get that one astronaut they left for dead on Mars. (Guess what movie I just re-watched.) They should have a goal/mission.
Who, or what are trying to stop them from from achieving their goal/mission. I reckon this is “Something disastrous” but it would help if it’s more specific than that.
Finally what are the stakes, what happens if they fail, and also if there’s a ticking clock, they have limited time to achieve their goal/mission before the disaster. For instance, they have to catch Matt Damon before the stripped down space capsule falls back down to Mars.
See lessAs a joke a lonely programmer creates an AI girlfriend that works with VR sunglasses, but his life becomes serious as he tries to hide his growing affection for his digital companion from his worried friends and family
Sorry if this is a little nitpicky and not affects the story or logline that much, but from what you're describing, it sounds like it's AR (Augmented Reality) rather than VR.
Sorry if this is a little nitpicky and not affects the story or logline that much, but from what you’re describing, it sounds like it’s AR (Augmented Reality) rather than VR.
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