1. Posted: February 22, 2020In:

    A computer hacker uses a computer that turns back time so that he stop a young woman turned cyborg from invading his town.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    And... then what happens? You're describing a situation, and that's not really a logline. Give the hacker a tangible goal and a ticking clock, plus what happens if he fails.

    And… then what happens?

    You’re describing a situation, and that’s not really a logline. Give the hacker a tangible goal and a ticking clock, plus what happens if he fails.

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  2. Posted: December 16, 2019In:

    An alter consciously riddled coma patient continues the struggle for his life and identity when he startles into traumatic recovery in search of a mysterious girl with an image

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    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    I get the impression that Dbdb4 has written the logline in a different language, and run it through Google Translate, or some other translation software, but not bothered to find out if the translated version makes sense.

    I get the impression that Dbdb4 has written the logline in a different language, and run it through Google Translate, or some other translation software, but not bothered to find out if the translated version makes sense.

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  3. Posted: September 27, 2019In:

    A na?ve teenager takes a job as an interstellar mailman, to move to a paradise planet. On the job, he gets chased by foreign agents and assassins and discovers his paradise isn’t as good as it sounds

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    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    Thank you. My idea was that it was partly his naivety that made him think being a mailman would get him what he wanted and that it was a method nobody else had tried. Your version of the logline captures the story much better than mine, though.

    Thank you. My idea was that it was partly his naivety that made him think being a mailman would get him what he wanted and that it was a method nobody else had tried.

    Your version of the logline captures the story much better than mine, though.

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