I don’t understand why you don’t think this is a log line. Can you please clarify. It includes the hero’s function: a psychiatrist. The hero’s weakness: young, inexperienced and rigid. The inciting incident: a dangerous patient brought into the hospital. The goal: deciding if the patient is mentally unstable or telling the truth about an alien abduction. And the stakes: the patient will be involuntarily hospitalized.

Also, I have researched the law regarding mental health, which is why the patient is described as dangerous. The log line doesn’t say he is potentially dangerous because he claims he was abducted, it says a potentially dangerous man claims he was abducted.

To clarify, in the story, the patient breaks into a house in the country, in the middle of the night, naked and raving about aliens. The scared homeowners attempt to defend themselves and their property and end up being threatened by their own kitchen knives. The patient then steals their clothes and vehicle, which he crashes into a police vehicle while attempting to evade arrest.

Since the patient is raving about aliens when he is arrested, the arresting officers take him to the hospital, believing him to be mentally unstable. When this happens, patients are evaluated over a 72 hour period. If the psychiatrists decide that the abductions the patient has been experiencing are delusions and he is mentally unstable, he would be involuntarily committed since he has engaged in dangerous behaviour.