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A man exploits his friends cocaine habit to finish a script by a deadline.
How? Why?Will he use some of his friend's drugs himself or get his friend to write it for him? The basic mechanics of the action aren't clear.
How? Why?
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After a new energy source is used to power an entire city, a young cleaning lady is called to protect the city from supernatural threats called Jinn that are attracted to the energy source. The Jinn take over human bodies and give their hosts supernatural powers.
The logline is too wordy and at the same time describes too few details. As DPG pointed out, what is her power and what motivates her to take action? Her getting the call is one thing but her WANTING/NEEDING to stop the baddies is another. Lastly, what specifically is her goal? Fending off the JinnRead more
The logline is too wordy and at the same time describes too few details.
As DPG pointed out, what is her power and what motivates her to take action? Her getting the call is one thing but her WANTING/NEEDING to stop the baddies is another.
Lastly, what specifically is her goal? Fending off the Jinn sounds like an ongoing task, what’s the end game? How will the audience know beyond a doubt that she has achieved her goal?
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Keep it as close as possible to 30 words and as Craig wrote describe the plot with specifics. Use a specific description for the main character, a specific event that motivates him to take action and describe a specific goal. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information.
Keep it as close as possible to 30 words and as Craig wrote describe the plot with specifics. Use a specific description for the main character, a specific event that motivates him to take action and describe a specific goal.
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.
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