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A simple disagreement in a gas station results in a store manager being brutally murdered. A dubious employee can’t accept the official explanation and asks one too many questions, sparking a series of events that could ruin him completely.
Love your user name by the way... This is too long and lacks detail. Why is the employee so adamant to find the killer? Is the employee a family member? What makes the murder personal for him? What's the end game for the employee? What MUST he achieve, or die trying, by the end of the story?
Love your user name by the way…
This is too long and lacks detail. Why is the employee so adamant to find the killer? Is the employee a family member? What makes the murder personal for him? What’s the end game for the employee? What MUST he achieve, or die trying, by the end of the story?
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The nightmare part is important to imply the genre - she becomes far more than? just a nuisance in the movie...
The nightmare part is important to imply the genre – she becomes far more than? just a nuisance in the movie…
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This is too vague: What does "...enters her world of seduction and murder..." mean? What are "...the great and terrible things Man is capable of..."? Be specific when describing your story and try to stick to logline conventions when doing so. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more infoRead more
This is too vague:
What does “…enters her world of seduction and murder…” mean?
What are “…the great and terrible things Man is capable of…”?
Be specific when describing your story and try to stick to logline conventions when doing so.
See lessCheck out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.