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A 38-year-old man, devout Catholic, and polio victim confined to an iron lung hires a sex surrogate so he can lose his virginity.
I would re write it so it reads as having more intent. For example: After his girlfriend rejects his marriage proposal, a devout Catholic polio victim confined to an iron lung, must hire a prostitute so he can lose his virginity.
I would re write it so it reads as having more intent. For example:
After his girlfriend rejects his marriage proposal, a devout Catholic polio victim confined to an iron lung, must hire a prostitute so he can lose his virginity.
See lessA group of thieves rob a police station in hope of retrieving sensitive evidence that could potentially end their criminal careers for good.
Agreed with all the above. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar of the web site for more info on logline structure.
Agreed with all the above. Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar of the web site for more info on logline structure.
See lessWhen mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town and all signs begin to point in an impossible, draconic direction, a new sheriff with something to prove must enlist the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurt.
Loglines are best written using specific and brief descriptions. The above could be rewritten as: After a dragon mutilates his pet dog, a newbie sheriff must enlist the help of the school janitor, a descendant of dragon hunters, to save the town. A modern-day knights and dragons story could be interRead more
Loglines are best written using specific and brief descriptions.
The above could be rewritten as:
After a dragon mutilates his pet dog, a newbie sheriff must enlist the help of the school janitor, a descendant of dragon hunters, to save the town.
A modern-day knights and dragons story could be interesting, but it needs to be described with efficiency and clarity.
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