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This romantic, sci-fi action fantasy is set in a medieval world where war is common and survival is a daily struggle. The young heroine, Betha must persevere to overcome beasts, barbarians, ice Vikings, mythical creatures, elves and savages throughout the kingdom who all want her head.
Agreed with all the above. I'll add that in most cases when you find yourself using many adjectives or genre descriptions in a logline, you know something is wrong.
Agreed with all the above.
I’ll add that in most cases when you find yourself using many adjectives or genre descriptions in a logline, you know something is wrong.
See lessA crazed sidekick searching for a new villain sets her sights on a mild-mannered journalist with a powerful secret.
I haven't read through the whole thread, so some of this may have been covered - sorry. Defining the protagonist as "...crazed..." is risky. Most good protagonists are characters people can empathize with, and crazy is not something viewers will easily accept. There are rare exceptions (Joker, AmeriRead more
I haven’t read through the whole thread, so some of this may have been covered – sorry.
Defining the protagonist as “…crazed…” is risky. Most good protagonists are characters people can empathize with, and crazy is not something viewers will easily accept. There are rare exceptions (Joker, American Psycho, A Clock Work Orange, etc…), however, most of these are based on pre-existing IP and usually have a known creative team behind them. It might be best to redefine the protagonist as desperate or aspiring instead.
See lessWhen she allows her husband’s overdose, a neglectful young mother must embark on a journey of recovery or risk losing her children to the system forever.
If she has custody over her children already, she is trying to keep the status quo as is. However, if she were to have lost custody over them, she would need to fight to get them back. What if the inciting event is her children being taken away, and her goal is getting them back? For example: AfterRead more
If she has custody over her children already, she is trying to keep the status quo as is. However, if she were to have lost custody over them, she would need to fight to get them back.
What if the inciting event is her children being taken away, and her goal is getting them back?
For example: After an addict loses her children to the state, she must kick the habit to get them back.
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