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A group of rich, snobby college students take their wheelchair-bound female friend to a cabin for the weekend where they are attacked by a pack of female zombies. The students can?t figure out why until the girl discovers that these students murdered them? and they are seeking revenge!
It would be better to rewrite the logline so the main character is seen as such from the beginning regardless. The switch in perception that you're talking about might work against you. Also, better to reduce the word count, at 48 words this is too long for a logline. Try to focus on the wheelchairRead more
It would be better to rewrite the logline so the main character is seen as such from the beginning regardless. The switch in perception that you’re talking about might work against you. Also, better to reduce the word count, at 48 words this is too long for a logline.
Try to focus on the wheelchair girl’s point of view, what was the very first thing that motivated her to either stop the zombies or do something to the college students? This way, you’ll be able to clarify her goal, a vital element currently missing in the logline.
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I was going to post a serious response but after this : "... the switch to animals of the human variety wouldn?t bother them much..." All I can say is 'Wow!' P.S That's not a good wow...
I was going to post a serious response but after this :
“… the switch to animals of the human variety wouldn?t bother them much…”
All I can say is ‘Wow!’
P.S
That’s not a good wow…
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Agreed with the above. In general, loglines are better when they focus on the plot. In this case, you seemed to describe the premise and setup instead of the major story beats.
Agreed with the above.
In general, loglines are better when they focus on the plot. In this case, you seemed to describe the premise and setup instead of the major story beats.
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