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A young sheriff returns home to where his outlaw mother was brutally killed to find the girl he grew up with now in charge and wanting the same for him.
Considering the sheriff as the MC, the inciting incident is when he discovers that the girl wants him to die as well. If this is the case then the logline is structured incorrectly, try placing the inciting incident at the beginning of the logline then describe what the MC needs to do to achieve a gRead more
Considering the sheriff as the MC, the inciting incident is when he discovers that the girl wants him to die as well.
If this is the case then the logline is structured incorrectly, try placing the inciting incident at the beginning of the logline then describe what the MC needs to do to achieve a goal, which needs to be specified (as previously mentioned by DPG).
Hope this helps Nir.
See lessA young sheriff returns home to where his outlaw mother was brutally killed to find the girl he grew up with now in charge and wanting the same for him.
Considering the sheriff as the MC, the inciting incident is when he discovers that the girl wants him to die as well. If this is the case then the logline is structured incorrectly, try placing the inciting incident at the beginning of the logline then describe what the MC needs to do to achieve a gRead more
Considering the sheriff as the MC, the inciting incident is when he discovers that the girl wants him to die as well.
If this is the case then the logline is structured incorrectly, try placing the inciting incident at the beginning of the logline then describe what the MC needs to do to achieve a goal, which needs to be specified (as previously mentioned by DPG).
Hope this helps Nir.
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