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After a special forces operative witnesses experiments on soldiers & prisoners, he abandons a promising military career & returns to the quiet life. But when a deadly outbreak reeks of government conspiracy & threatens his family, he jumps into the fight to expose the culprits & track down the cure.
Good notes given above. I'll add that loglines are made up of specific detail, and descriptions such as "...struggles to preserve his humanity..." are too vague for a logline. What actions specifically does he do or not do when struggling to preserve his humanity? It's these that need to be in the lRead more
Good notes given above.
I’ll add that loglines are made up of specific detail, and descriptions such as “…struggles to preserve his humanity…” are too vague for a logline. What actions specifically does he do or not do when struggling to preserve his humanity? It’s these that need to be in the logline for it to make sense.
See lessA 19th century jaded farm boy finds an alien ring and is thrown back and forth in time: but on his way back, the boy encounters love, wisdom and, of course, evil time-travelling twins working for a malicious time-crime boss.
This logline is too long and lacks the necessary structural elements. It may be a good idea for you to read through the Training tab on the top bar for more information about loglines.As it is described now, the inciting incident is the boy finding a ring, however this doesn't logically and directlyRead more
This logline is too long and lacks the necessary structural elements. It may be a good idea for you to read through the Training tab on the top bar for more information about loglines.
As it is described now, the inciting incident is the boy finding a ring, however this doesn’t logically and directly lead him to seek out a goal.? To that matter, there is no one particular goal described in the logline.
See lessWhat is it he MUST do, and what specifically MOTIVATES him to achieve this goal? This information will comprise your dramatic premise, and help you draft a better logline.
The Examiner, is a thriller about an emotionally stressed widower and single parent bank examiner, who investigating a multi-billion dollar financial fraud,discover that all clues lead to himself and must find the imposter before a determined anti-fraud unit officer catches up with him.This becomes increasingly difficult because the imposter- happens to be the way ward son he is struggling to control , being forced by an ex-convict bank manager on a revenge course..
Agreed with DPG.Look at the Training tab on the top bar of this website, it may help you understand the preferred structure? for a logline.A significant and out of the ordinary event motivates a flawed character to take action in order to achieve a compelling goal.Fundamentally, you only need to desRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Look at the Training tab on the top bar of this website, it may help you understand the preferred structure? for a logline.
A significant and out of the ordinary event motivates a flawed character to take action in order to achieve a compelling goal.
Fundamentally, you only need to describe a motivating event and an inciting incident – in your case him being framed, and a goal – in your case catching the culprit.? Best to keep the logline under 30 words, and be sure to be clear about who does what.
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