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An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.
Neither of the characters seems flawed in a way that implies a journey of change, and at the same time (like Richiev said) there appear to be very little stakes and conflict.According to the logline, the two meet, agree on their terms of collaboration and launch a dating website - end of story. HowRead more
Neither of the characters seems flawed in a way that implies a journey of change, and at the same time (like Richiev said) there appear to be very little stakes and conflict.
According to the logline, the two meet, agree on their terms of collaboration and launch a dating website – end of story. How will that be dramatic? What force is opposing them? And how will they internally change as a result?
See lessWhen a young law clerk is pursued by the police because his senior partner has implicated him in a criminal enterprise he must embroil his boss in the crime to save himself.
Not sure a job is a good enough goal - if he loses his job, he'll get another one - not nice but not too bad, especially today when so many people are losing their jobs... Is there a stakes character you could bring in to the story?
Not sure a job is a good enough goal – if he loses his job, he’ll get another one – not nice but not too bad, especially today when so many people are losing their jobs…
Is there a stakes character you could bring in to the story?
See lessIn a future where winners are conceived using genetic engineering, a born loser buys the identity of a winner on the black market so he can fulfill his lifelong dream of space travel.
So, if he doesn't make it into space, nothing much changes right? Mmm... I seem to remember that the film wasn't particularly good - it wasn't bad, just a bit forgettable. Maybe it's the low stakes.
So, if he doesn’t make it into space, nothing much changes right?
Mmm… I seem to remember that the film wasn’t particularly good – it wasn’t bad, just a bit forgettable. Maybe it’s the low stakes.
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