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A young doctor tries an untested vaccine to save her brother’s life which results in a virus that destroys the world as we know it. She now has to lead a group of young survivors to safety. Trying to avoid a world of infected people and scavengers, while being hunted by something they’ve never seen before.
Agreed with Richiev. I'll add that, the central conflict in the premise is vague. She leads them, they follow, and at some point, they all arrive at the 'safe place' - end of story. What's standing in their way? What's going to make their journey interesting? It's worth noting that post-apocalypse cRead more
Agreed with Richiev.
I’ll add that, the central conflict in the premise is vague. She leads them, they follow, and at some point, they all arrive at the ‘safe place’ – end of story. What’s standing in their way? What’s going to make their journey interesting?
It’s worth noting that post-apocalypse concepts have been done to death, in many formats and genres, what is it about this particular story that will make it stand out from the rest?
Don’t get me wrong, I think that post-apocalypse stories will always have an audience, but I think that such a story needs a unique ‘hook’ especially now day and age. Said hook may well be the nature or type of conflict they face on their journey.
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I like the modern Gladiator style blood sports premise, but it does have a few logic flaws that make it hard to understand. He is a murderer. He no longer remembers the murders. Now he is given the opportunity to remember them. Why would he want that? Is he a psychopath and craves the memories? If sRead more
I like the modern Gladiator style blood sports premise, but it does have a few logic flaws that make it hard to understand.
He is a murderer. He no longer remembers the murders. Now he is given the opportunity to remember them.
See lessWhy would he want that? Is he a psychopath and craves the memories? If so, why would the audience care about him and or his memories?
If, however, he is convinced he is innocent, how will his memories prove it – they’re only memories, not hard evidence. Should he not be striving to find proof of his innocence?
When a sarcastic lesbian becomes best friends with the God of War, she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.
Agreed with DPG and Knightrider. I'll add that it isn't clear how her being a lesbian contributes to the story, is there a better description you can give her instead? What is her major flaw? Perhaps she is a lifelong skeptic and forced to reevaluate her skepticism after befriending a god. Last thinRead more
Agreed with DPG and Knightrider.
I’ll add that it isn’t clear how her being a lesbian contributes to the story, is there a better description you can give her instead? What is her major flaw? Perhaps she is a lifelong skeptic and forced to reevaluate her skepticism after befriending a god.
Last thing, the inciting incident is rather weak “…becomes best friends with the God of War…” what else can happen to her that would motivate her to take action?
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