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When her plants succumb to a disease, a mute girl, haunted by visions, must find resistant seeds in a violent post-apocalyptic world.
Agreed with the above - it's very hard to see the forest for the trees (pardon the pun...) What is the crux of the story? Her fighting and defeating the 'evil corporation'/high tech people? Or her raising a successful crop? Or her learning to communicate and finding a family or group of friends?
Agreed with the above – it’s very hard to see the forest for the trees (pardon the pun…)
What is the crux of the story?
See lessHer fighting and defeating the ‘evil corporation’/high tech people?
Or her raising a successful crop?
Or her learning to communicate and finding a family or group of friends?
when a women recived text from her child passed away ten years ago ,she try to fined him to prove it is not illusion
I like the premise. It has an air of mystery, yet at the same time, has the potential for a lot of heart. I agree with Variable, and will add that it would greatly help if the scope of the challenge was made clear. For example, the movie Lion presented a slightly similar situation, boy wants to findRead more
I like the premise. It has an air of mystery, yet at the same time, has the potential for a lot of heart.
I agree with Variable, and will add that it would greatly help if the scope of the challenge was made clear.
For example, the movie Lion presented a slightly similar situation, boy wants to find his mum but at the same time, he had to look for her in India. With 1 billion people to search through the size of his task made his challenge clear and his obstacle huge.
See lessWhat would be the equivalent for this mother? Could the child have been lost, or presumed dead, in China?
When her husband is murdered, a headstrong businesswoman must turn to a tortured past and deadly skills to hunt down the killer and save her own life.
Agreed with Karel and Foxtrot25. I would go as far as describing adding detail to her past this will eliminate the need to specify the skills, i.e: After her husband is murdered, a former spy gone businesswoman must hunt down the killer to save her own life. "...Hunt down..." implies to kill him, orRead more
Agreed with Karel and Foxtrot25.
I would go as far as describing adding detail to her past this will eliminate the need to specify the skills, i.e:
After her husband is murdered, a former spy gone businesswoman must hunt down the killer to save her own life.
“…Hunt down…” implies to kill him, or her, and by specifying her as a former spy it’s made clear that she can do it.
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