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After an attempt on his father’s life, a by-the-book Marine captain must kill his father’s rivals and become head of his own crime family to protect those he loves.
Not sure if we've done this one yet or not, but I just posted it as an example on another thread and thought it may be worth while looking into.My thinking on this is:Michael Corleone refused to be a part of his family's crime business - he's a reluctant hero.His father is nearly killed by a competiRead more
Not sure if we’ve done this one yet or not, but I just posted it as an example on another thread and thought it may be worth while looking into.
My thinking on this is:
Michael Corleone refused to be a part of his family’s crime business – he’s a reluctant hero.
His father is nearly killed by a competing family – a world changing inciting incident.
His brothers are incapable of running the family for them to survive the conflict – Michael’s call to adventure.
Michael realizes he is the only one who can lead the family to safety through this conflict.
He kills the ones responsible for the attempt on his father’s life, runs to avoid the law, then comes back and kills the rest of the rivals, and lastly assumes his rightful place as godfather.
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Agreed with much of the above. Maybe you can change it so the guy lives and it's actually his story of getting the girl?
Agreed with much of the above.
Maybe you can change it so the guy lives and it’s actually his story of getting the girl?
See lessPlanet Spaceballs’ President Skroob sends Lord Dark Helmet to steal planet Druidia’s abundant supply of air to replenish their own, and only Lone Starr can stop them. SPACEBALLS
I think the logline should have been told from Lone Starr's perspective:When asked to rescue a Drewish princess from the dreaded Spaceballs, a cynical mercenary must learn the ways of the Schwartz in order to fight the Spaceballs army's evil commander.I'll admit, I chuckled when writing this...
I think the logline should have been told from Lone Starr’s perspective:
When asked to rescue a Drewish princess from the dreaded Spaceballs, a cynical mercenary must learn the ways of the Schwartz in order to fight the Spaceballs army’s evil commander.
I’ll admit, I chuckled when writing this…
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