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UPDATED: When a teenage boy living in modern-day Texas befriends a teenage Mexican slave, he must expose a secret slave-trading business to save his friend.
I just read your previous post about the same concept. In future, please restrict your revisions to the same thread of the original logline, you'll be able to track the logline/concept's evolution more easily this way.
I just read your previous post about the same concept.
In future, please restrict your revisions to the same thread of the original logline, you’ll be able to track the logline/concept’s evolution more easily this way.
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The plot is unclear from the logline. What does he do? "...must confront what life might be like..." is too vague a description for a logline - we simply don't know what the MC's main action will be. What is his specific goal? It can't merely be to survive, the MC needs to set his sights at a definiRead more
The plot is unclear from the logline.
What does he do? “…must confront what life might be like…” is too vague a description for a logline – we simply don’t know what the MC’s main action will be.
What is his specific goal? It can’t merely be to survive, the MC needs to set his sights at a definitive end to the story, otherwise, it could go on indefinitely.
See lessUPDATED: When a teenage boy living in modern-day Texas befriends a teenage Mexican slave, he must expose a secret slave-trading business to save his friend.
Perhaps best to describe the American boy as a bigot, his goal would then necessitate him to complete his inner journey and make his story far more interesting - teenage boy means little as a character description in a logline. What is his specific goal he must achieve in order to free his new frienRead more
Perhaps best to describe the American boy as a bigot, his goal would then necessitate him to complete his inner journey and make his story far more interesting – teenage boy means little as a character description in a logline.
What is his specific goal he must achieve in order to free his new friend? Is it to have the master mind behind the slave trade arrested? Is it to capture the bad guys red handed on video? What ever it is, it has to be specified in the logline, “…must expose a secret slave-trading business…” can mean any number of things in today’s net savvy world.
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