1. Posted: June 24, 2017In:

    Down an english mine, an unexpected explosion damages David’s chance of earning a decent living, thus sending ripples through the Cornish village.

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    Not much more to say all the above comments covered it all. Best you check out the 'Formula' tab up top for more information about loglines.

    Not much more to say all the above comments covered it all.

    Best you check out the ‘Formula’ tab up top for more information about loglines.

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  2. Posted: June 21, 2017In:

    Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ?Bug Collector? fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

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    In that case, I would define him as a scientist - for the laymen it makes the story clear despite not being entirely accurate.I.e: After a military scientist resurrects a prehistoric virus on an isolated Island, he must find a vaccine in time to prevent a pandemic. 24 words.

    In that case, I would define him as a scientist – for the laymen it makes the story clear despite not being entirely accurate.

    I.e:
    After a military scientist resurrects a prehistoric virus on an isolated Island, he must find a vaccine in time to prevent a pandemic.
    24 words.

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  3. Posted: June 22, 2017In:

    A rookie Senator facing his first vote reevaluates his platform and priorities when his wife is murdered in a mass shooting.

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    Richiev beat me to it.I was going to suggest you make it so his party is for guns, but after his wife dies he is against guns.So which party would best fit the bill (pardon the pun) and clarify that if he wants gun control he will be working against his own party?

    Richiev beat me to it.

    I was going to suggest you make it so his party is for guns, but after his wife dies he is against guns.
    So which party would best fit the bill (pardon the pun) and clarify that if he wants gun control he will be working against his own party?

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