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When dad goes bankrupt, one percenter Adam Lewis must learn to live within his means.
Best if you would specify exactly how he'll make ends meat. Does he have to be a waiter in the country club he previously was a member of? Does he have to mow the lawn for all their previously super-rich neighbors? Or will he go into crime? It's the details of his humiliation that will make his fishRead more
Best if you would specify exactly how he’ll make ends meat. Does he have to be a waiter in the country club he previously was a member of? Does he have to mow the lawn for all their previously super-rich neighbors? Or will he go into crime?
It’s the details of his humiliation that will make his fish out of water predicament fun.
See lessLt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ?Bug Collector? fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.
Point taken about the bug collector, it may actully create intrigue. I for one was curious about what a bug collectro means. I would, however, cut the character's name as Foxtrot25 suggested - it's superfluous and you could replace it with a flaw. If his job is to collect dangerous pathogens, why isRead more
Point taken about the bug collector, it may actully create intrigue. I for one was curious about what a bug collectro means.
I would, however, cut the character’s name as Foxtrot25 suggested – it’s superfluous and you could replace it with a flaw. If his job is to collect dangerous pathogens, why is he chasing his own creation? Did he creat a new ‘bug’? And what’s his end game to find a cure or escape the island?
See lessSeduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.
Imagine sitting opposite an executive and pitching them a story about characters who don't know what they want and haven't got any clear goals. It's basically the same as Seinfeld's pitch for a show about nothing... albeit that worked for him, but it was a parody of TV executives.What is a good compRead more
Imagine sitting opposite an executive and pitching them a story about characters who don’t know what they want and haven’t got any clear goals. It’s basically the same as Seinfeld’s pitch for a show about nothing… albeit that worked for him, but it was a parody of TV executives.
What is a good comparison for your show? Can you say: yours is like ‘this’ meets ‘that’?
Let’s assume your MC is the Indonesian woman. You wrote she moved to the city in pursuit of her dreams, but what does that mean in a practical sense? Also, what action does she take to achieve them?
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