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An equation(chemistry) to develop a psychedelic drug that can be ingested in many forms ,the results in longevity have the same effect,but in/on each individual will be processed differently.
A story only exists if it has a plot. A plot is a sequence of events and actions, taken a by character, that are bound by a unity of action in the pursuit of a goal. Point is a producer will want to know what the story is going to be, and for that you will need a plot and subsequently a character. ORead more
A story only exists if it has a plot. A plot is a sequence of events and actions, taken a by character, that are bound by a unity of action in the pursuit of a goal.
Point is a producer will want to know what the story is going to be, and for that you will need a plot and subsequently a character. Otherwise, you’re describing a situation not a story.
So who is the main character? What do they want and why? How do they achieve it? How will the equation fit in?
See lessWhen a neglected housewife discovers that the nest will be empty sooner than she had planned, she follows her daughter to the beach for the summer in an effort to save their last few months together, quickly realizing she has a lot to learn about their relationship, her marriage and herself.
Agreed with DPG. The inciting incident and goal descriptions were unclear. Secondly, the MC sounds like she is a sad derivative of her family instead of a person in her own right. This could make for a good inner journey, in that she needs to learn to become none dependent on her husband and childreRead more
Agreed with DPG. The inciting incident and goal descriptions were unclear.
Secondly, the MC sounds like she is a sad derivative of her family instead of a person in her own right. This could make for a good inner journey, in that she needs to learn to become none dependent on her husband and children – her own person. However, this needs to be communicated clearly, and a logline is all about the outer journey to achieve an outer goal. Therefore, best you describe her as actively pursuing a clear outer goal, which is not related to her children, and use her character description to imply that she is emotionally dependent on her family.
See lessA troubled South African teenager learns the true meaning of prayer when he confronts a TOKOLOSHE. (16)
Best to define the evil spirit as such instead of naming it - most readers will simply not understand what you mean as they will likely not know the myth behind the creature. The big problem I have with this concept is that the moral of the story is: believe in spirits and prey for salvation. This cRead more
Best to define the evil spirit as such instead of naming it – most readers will simply not understand what you mean as they will likely not know the myth behind the creature.
The big problem I have with this concept is that the moral of the story is: believe in spirits and prey for salvation. This contradicts my life philosophy, so on a personal level I don’t find it interesting nor compelling.
See lessI would find it powerfull if the boy tried to pray for salvation but is forced to take action in order to stop the monster, and discovers that he can rely on himself instead of superstition and or religion.