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When two bickering sisters inherit their grandmother?s precious doll collection, they get more than they bargain for with a house horde of dolls, and a demonic entity threatening their life.
There are a few descriptions that often pop up in loglines, one of these is; "...get more than they bargained for..." In case you're wondering, another example would be; "...his/her world falls apart..." The point is that these are a perfectly generic description, and by nature add very little to aRead more
There are a few descriptions that often pop up in loglines, one of these is; “…get more than they bargained for…”
In case you’re wondering, another example would be; “…his/her world falls apart…”
The point is that these are a perfectly generic description, and by nature add very little to a logline. Since word real estate is at a premium in loglines, you’d be better of using descriptions that contribute to a clearer understanding of the plot.
Also, it sounds as if the inciting event is the demon appearing, not the inheritance. To that matter, their goal would be vanquishing the demon, which needs to me specified in the logline. Just saying that the demon threatens their lives is an implication that they’ll have to defeat the demon, but it’s not a clear definition of a goal.
See lessWhen a deadly plague devastates the small village she’s passing, a cloistered sister, just out of the Abbey, hunts down clues to the seemingly magical affliction in order to discover who created the plague and save the town.
It has elements of The Name of The? Rose and Outbreak, but with a twist of magic - me like.THE_CNI has a point though, perhaps it would be better to make the village her home town. This increases the stakes as her own family will die if she fails.My try:After a deadly plague devastates her parents'Read more
It has elements of The Name of The? Rose and Outbreak, but with a twist of magic – me like.
THE_CNI has a point though, perhaps it would be better to make the village her home town. This increases the stakes as her own family will die if she fails.
My try:
After a deadly plague devastates her parents’ village, a nun in training must leave the Abby and stop the black magic causing the disease.
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See lessA giant IRL (In Real Life) shooting game in an abandoned warehouse is targeted by a masked serial killer who starts to pick off the warring combatants under the cover of darkness.
This should be defined as an augmented reality game instead of an In Real Life shooting game.
This should be defined as an augmented reality game instead of an In Real Life shooting game.
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