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A group of rich, snobby college students take their wheelchair-bound female friend to a cabin for the weekend where they are attacked by a pack of female zombies. The students can?t figure out why until the girl discovers that these students murdered them? and they are seeking revenge!
It would be better to rewrite the logline so the main character is seen as such from the beginning regardless. The switch in perception that you're talking about might work against you. Also, better to reduce the word count, at 48 words this is too long for a logline. Try to focus on the wheelchairRead more
It would be better to rewrite the logline so the main character is seen as such from the beginning regardless. The switch in perception that you’re talking about might work against you. Also, better to reduce the word count, at 48 words this is too long for a logline.
Try to focus on the wheelchair girl’s point of view, what was the very first thing that motivated her to either stop the zombies or do something to the college students? This way, you’ll be able to clarify her goal, a vital element currently missing in the logline.
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Hey all, I'm researching my next script and thought this would be a good place to get some opinions. If you remember these films, I wonder, which character would you say is the main character in The Departed, and what would you say was his flaw? Also, what did you think was Donnie Brasco's flaw? ThaRead more
Hey all,
I’m researching my next script and thought this would be a good place to get some opinions.
What is the relationship between a script and story logline?
Richiev put it very well, so there's very little to add. However, one thing worth mentioning is that the power of a logline comes from the inherent conflict in the plot it describes. The best loglines are the ones that use the least adjectives to describe a clear cause and effect relationship betweeRead more
Richiev put it very well, so there’s very little to add. However, one thing worth mentioning is that the power of a logline comes from the inherent conflict in the plot it describes. The best loglines are the ones that use the least adjectives to describe a clear cause and effect relationship between the event, obstacle and goal.
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