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An unemployed mother works hard to get an honorable job as a zookeeper, but then finds herself at the center of an ethical conflict between a zoo and an unorthodox shelter for wildlife.
Agreed with the above comments. As a rule of thumb, loglines are made up of clear details, not vague statements. Therefore descriptions such as "...an unorthodox shelter..." are not helpful in a logline. These kinds of descriptions could mean anything, for example, they could give all the animals maRead more
Agreed with the above comments.
As a rule of thumb, loglines are made up of clear details, not vague statements. Therefore descriptions such as “…an unorthodox shelter…” are not helpful in a logline.
See lessThese kinds of descriptions could mean anything, for example, they could give all the animals massages after being fed – that’s unorthodox…
Obviously, you mean they are doing bad things to the animals, but that could also mean any number of things – medical experiments, inhumane living conditions, systematic euthanasia.
Two friend’s relationship turns hostile after one of them reveals their love for the other.
Is this a feature film or short? It seems to lack enough plot for a full-length feature. The action is vague, who ends up doing what for most of act two? Lastly, "...turns hostile..." I can understand if it gets awkward but why hostile?
Is this a feature film or short?
It seems to lack enough plot for a full-length feature. The action is vague, who ends up doing what for most of act two?
Lastly, “…turns hostile…” I can understand if it gets awkward but why hostile?
See lessWhen a trusting young boy living in a racist community befriends a kidnapped Mexican teenager, he must reevaluate his ethics and expose the secret slave-trading business before all the captives are sold.
You describe two goals - expose the secret and free the slaves. I suggest you focus on freeing the slaves, no amount of exposure poses a risk anymore to a person who's not a celebrity. Freeing slaves is a long-standing goal throughout story history and will likely never lose it's appeal. Secondly, wRead more
You describe two goals – expose the secret and free the slaves. I suggest you focus on freeing the slaves, no amount of exposure poses a risk anymore to a person who’s not a celebrity. Freeing slaves is a long-standing goal throughout story history and will likely never lose it’s appeal.
Secondly, what does “…a racist community…” mean? Does it matter whether it’s racist or not? They’re slave traders, their values and ethics are skewed regardless their bigotry. Why not focus on the MC fighting slavery alone?
For example:
See lessAfter a niave boy develops a crush on a girl held as a slave by his family, he must free her and her parents before they are sold.