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As war consumes a planet, a noble warrior is born to pick a side and it is up to him to protect them and ensure their survival. It’s rusty. I am no writer, which is why I need your help. Be brutally honest. Please and thank you.
I suggest you look at the Formula tab on the top bar to learn more about logline conventions. To get you started in the right direction; What is the inciting incident for the main character? What motivates him to take action? What will the main character do to ensure their survival?
I suggest you look at the Formula tab on the top bar to learn more about logline conventions.
To get you started in the right direction;
See lessWhat is the inciting incident for the main character?
What motivates him to take action?
What will the main character do to ensure their survival?
A Shakespearian actor becomes unable to tell reality from a play. When his character Mercutio dies he wanders through what he believes is the afterlife distressing his family and friends. Title : A grave man
Nbz.You've posted several loglines already and seem to be getting very similar comments on all of them. I strongly suggest you study the comments you've already gotten to see how you can improve.A logline is a tool used to describe a plot, the vital components of a plot are; a character, an incitingRead more
Nbz.
You’ve posted several loglines already and seem to be getting very similar comments on all of them. I strongly suggest you study the comments you’ve already gotten to see how you can improve.
A logline is a tool used to describe a plot, the vital components of a plot are; a character, an inciting incident, stakes and a goal most of which are missing in this post.
Your main character is an actor, good, but what does he want, why and what does he stand to lose?
See lessA father and the estranged daughter he seeks to reconnect with accompany an affluent friend to a secret restaurant. The father is horrified to learn the restaurant serves nothing but human meat, and must find a way to cope while protecting his daughter’s innocence.
Father and daughter reconnecting is a good base for a story and can make for an interesting film, however, the cannibalism feels like it's tacked on as a click bate device more than a plot necessity. If cannibalism was somehow a part of their lives then it would fit in better, right now it feels likRead more
Father and daughter reconnecting is a good base for a story and can make for an interesting film, however, the cannibalism feels like it’s tacked on as a click bate device more than a plot necessity. If cannibalism was somehow a part of their lives then it would fit in better, right now it feels like an external add on for ‘crazy’ effect.
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