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When his working class father forbids him to take a ballet class, a young boy with a passion for dancing secretly takes private lessons to audition for a slot at the Royal Ballet school.
A bit wordy... How about: After his father forbids him from learning ballet, an ambitious boy secretly takes lessons to audition for a slot at the Royal Ballet School.
A bit wordy…
How about:
After his father forbids him from learning ballet, an ambitious boy secretly takes lessons to audition for a slot at the Royal Ballet School.
See lessA struggling Aborginal widow is determined to make her 4 bi-racial daughters into a huge international girl band to guarantee they’ll never see poverty again.
The logic at the base of the premise doesn't hold up. If she genuinely wants to guarantee that her daughters won't be poor, wouldn't getting them a higher education provide a greater chance of success in that sense?
The logic at the base of the premise doesn’t hold up.
If she genuinely wants to guarantee that her daughters won’t be poor, wouldn’t getting them a higher education provide a greater chance of success in that sense?
See lessTwo NYT investigators must pursue three decades of sexually harassed women to incriminate a powerful film producer.
So two investigative journalists doing their jobs... Not sure what about this makes for a good story. Is there a big bad someone they're fighting to get the story out, or some other form of resistance? If not, there's not enough/at all conflict here from the journalists' points of view.
So two investigative journalists doing their jobs… Not sure what about this makes for a good story.
Is there a big bad someone they’re fighting to get the story out, or some other form of resistance? If not, there’s not enough/at all conflict here from the journalists’ points of view.
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