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Rumours of the special school closure looming, fifteen year old student Toni must? decide and risk everything she knows and believes to feel she finally belongs in her world.
Hi Athena, Glad you took my advice and posted it here... Richiev and DPG both raised similar issues and solutions to what we discussed at the meetup, this should give you some good direction for further development.
Hi Athena,
Glad you took my advice and posted it here…
Richiev and DPG both raised similar issues and solutions to what we discussed at the meetup, this should give you some good direction for further development.
See lessA 38-year-old man, devout Catholic, and polio victim confined to an iron lung hires a sex surrogate so he can lose his virginity.
I would re write it so it reads as having more intent. For example: After his girlfriend rejects his marriage proposal, a devout Catholic polio victim confined to an iron lung, must hire a prostitute so he can lose his virginity.
I would re write it so it reads as having more intent. For example:
After his girlfriend rejects his marriage proposal, a devout Catholic polio victim confined to an iron lung, must hire a prostitute so he can lose his virginity.
See lessWhen a crew of mismatched oilfield workers stay late to finish a job in the middle of nowhere, they are attacked by bloodthirsty monsters. They’ll have to band together to fight through blood guts, and teeth if they want to live to see another sunrise.
Sounds like a great premise for a horror. Could the monsters have come out as a result of the drilling? Perhaps this would add an environmental metaphor. As suggested above, you need to specify a main character and define the story in the context of their experience instead of a group.
Sounds like a great premise for a horror. Could the monsters have come out as a result of the drilling? Perhaps this would add an environmental metaphor. As suggested above, you need to specify a main character and define the story in the context of their experience instead of a group.
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