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After his ship crashes on a remote planet, the surviving Marine tries to get back to the front but finds himself in a mining town ruled by two rival gangs. He must stop the gangs fighting to get out of there alive.
The revision by Recluse is more concise, but still has the same problems the original post had - predominantly in the basic logic of the premise.
The revision by Recluse is more concise, but still has the same problems the original post had – predominantly in the basic logic of the premise.
See lessWhen his daughter’s rape-homicide case turns cold, a child psychologist gradually befriends a rehabbing pedophile (the prime suspect) to solicit his trust and a confession.
This raised more questions than curiosity. What is a rehabbing pedophile? Is there such a program? Is he in jail? Out of jail? In a mental institute??Is he befriending or (more likely) is he faking friendship with the pedophile? Lastly, what's going to happen throughout the film? What is the actionRead more
This raised more questions than curiosity.
What is a rehabbing pedophile? Is there such a program? Is he in jail? Out of jail? In a mental institute??Is he befriending or (more likely) is he faking friendship with the pedophile?
Lastly, what’s going to happen throughout the film? What is the action that the MC takes? Is the film going to be about the MC going on long walks in the park, having a beer or playing golf with the pedophile?
See lessThe frase “?gradually befriends?” can mean so many things, but what will it mean on the screen in practical terms? I think the plot is rather thin for a full length feature film.
After his ship crashes on a remote planet, the surviving Marine tries to get back to the front but finds himself in a mining town ruled by two rival gangs. He must stop the gangs fighting to get out of there alive.
The concerns that jumped to mind, when I read the concept, were about the causal connection of the events. As Dkpough1?pointed out, what is the reason he needs to stop the fighting? How does him crashing on the planet make him NEED to stop the fighting? If it's just a writing connivence thing (we alRead more
The concerns that jumped to mind, when I read the concept, were about the causal connection of the events. As Dkpough1?pointed out, what is the reason he needs to stop the fighting? How does him crashing on the planet make him NEED to stop the fighting?
If it’s just a writing connivence thing (we all do it once in a while?) there needs to be more causality, i.e the fight on the planet caused a missile to go into space and hit his ship which forced him to crash land. Other wise it’s a random event that makes him take action. Better yet if he was sent to investigate or stop the fighting in the first place, and then he gets shot down.
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