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  1. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Comedy

    When his gay cruise ship is invaded by terrorists, a veteran turned drag queen must use his skills to take down the thugs and save the day.

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    Added an answer on April 28, 2019 at 6:44 pm

    Sounds like Under Siege meets The Bird Cage... I'm not clear on what a gay cruise ship is. Do you mean this is a cruise that only members of the LGBTQI+ (and whatever other acronyms are supposed to go at the end of that...) can purchase tickets to? That's discrimination against straight people, isn'Read more

    Sounds like Under Siege meets The Bird Cage…

    I’m not clear on what a gay cruise ship is. Do you mean this is a cruise that only members of the LGBTQI+ (and whatever other acronyms are supposed to go at the end of that…) can purchase tickets to? That’s discrimination against straight people, isn’t it? How are customers meant to prove that they’re gay?

    How does the gay part of the cruise ship relate to the plot? If so, in what way does the gay aspect inform the story?

     

     

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  2. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Thriller

    When two donors to a rising fascist leader commit suicide, a conspiracy theorist FBI agent must investigate if there is a connection; but when he discovers an elaborate CIA plot to stop the fascist, he must put his country before the law, and protect future targets by killing their leader.

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    Added an answer on April 28, 2019 at 6:37 pm

    "...must investigate if there is a connection..." connection to what? Do you mean investigate if there's a link between the suicides? Wouldn't the discovery of the CIA plot be the inciting event? Kind of feels like the story starts there. What does "...put his country before the law..." mean? What dRead more

    “…must investigate if there is a connection…” connection to what? Do you mean investigate if there’s a link between the suicides? Wouldn’t the discovery of the CIA plot be the inciting event? Kind of feels like the story starts there.

    What does “…put his country before the law…” mean? What does this mean in practical terms? Does he set out to kill the leader of the fascists? This could also be interpreted as the leader of the country or the CIA…

    Also, not sure that a plot to stop a fascist group would necessarily grab an audience’s attention, especially considering the current political situation – it’s not particularly novel…

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  3. Posted: April 5, 2019In: Thriller

    Reeling from the loss of their eldest son to the war, a family welcomes the company of a mysterious soldier claiming to fulfill a promise to a fallen comrade.

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    Added an answer on April 7, 2019 at 10:03 pm

    Who is the main character? The father? The mother? Or the returned soldier?

    Who is the main character? The father? The mother? Or the returned soldier?

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